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Woot woot! *dreams about Flabby*
I'd really like to know if this main girl is somewhat based on Emily? Because her significant others name is "Buck." Any connection?
I'd really like to know if this main girl is somewhat based on Emily? Because her significant others name is "Buck." Any connection?

*dies laughing at 'Con's dreams* Okay, okay, *snicker*, I'll stop teasing you noowww...... *breaks into uncontrollable guffaws*
NO WAY!!!
You even suggest such sacrilege again, and I will personally put you through the shredder! (hint: Monster's Inc) 
Buck is...um...based on THE Buck, but only because I happened to dream of him and thought the dream would make a great story. (the actual dream hasn't been posted yet, but we'll get to it)
So in answer to your question, Elf Girl is NOTHING like Emily.
Got it?
She's more like...well...I'm not really sure. She lives and breathes of her own accord in my mind, so I'm not certain who she takes after. Hopefully me... 
NO WAY!!!


Buck is...um...based on THE Buck, but only because I happened to dream of him and thought the dream would make a great story. (the actual dream hasn't been posted yet, but we'll get to it)

So in answer to your question, Elf Girl is NOTHING like Emily.




I'm just saying Punzy... Elf seem to be a bit more opinionated, likes to know what she's doing and takes charge.... She is also immersed in a mystery and in love with a guy named Buck... Can you blame me for wondering if this Emily clone was actually based of of the beloved one and only, Emily Jones?

Oh, now you're going to say that I'M like Emily because I'm opinionated! Connie is quite opinionated, you know. 
I might add that Elf is not taking charge and does not know what she's doing. Oh, it may SOUND that way, but in her heart of hearts, she knows.
And she cannot forget what she knows.
Unlike Emily, who needs a new lesson every weekend. But that's getting off topic here (oh, where is Ben to direct traffic?)
SHE
IS
NOT
A
CLONE
For that, I just might kill your character off...if she doesn't marry Sasquatch first!


I might add that Elf is not taking charge and does not know what she's doing. Oh, it may SOUND that way, but in her heart of hearts, she knows.
And she cannot forget what she knows.
Unlike Emily, who needs a new lesson every weekend. But that's getting off topic here (oh, where is Ben to direct traffic?)

SHE
IS
NOT
A
CLONE
For that, I just might kill your character off...if she doesn't marry Sasquatch first!



I really hate to do this, but I need to post the next part. So here goes... 
Much thanks for Blitz for editing. I have not seen mines. 


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Punzy, if you lay one more ever deepening plot line, I swear I'll cry! Emil-uh, I mean Elf just seems to get a tad more suspicious in every entry!
Can't wait for the next installment!
Can't wait for the next installment!

Oooooo, am so making you cry! 
Dude, suspicious doesn't even describe what I've got in store...

Dude, suspicious doesn't even describe what I've got in store...


Yay! Looking forward to it. The deeper the plot the better.Helios wrote: Dude, suspicious doesn't even describe what I've got in store...

Question that may or may not have been answered at some point: What is Hecate's Chrono and Apollo's Chrono? I assume they are ways of telling time but are they based on anything from our present?
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Lol, I'm actually pretty curious myself, because I'm not exactly sure where I'm going with this.Ameraka wrote:
Yay! Looking forward to it. The deeper the plot the better.I'm really curious about Elf's past and what's going to happen in her future.
Question that may or may not have been answered at some point: What is Hecate's Chrono and Apollo's Chrono? I assume they are ways of telling time but are they based on anything from our present?


Hecate and Apollo's Chrono refer to the time in the Apollo and Hecate systems. Hecate has maybe three, four planets, Apollo five or six. It's a little complicated...does that answer your question?


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I think she's asking whether it corresponds somehow to our time. For instance, there's a gap in the middle of the story that's 45 minutes by the little time you put at the top. Does that mean 45 minutes as we know it, or is it different?

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Fear, I'm so sorry I've not been around to comment on this. I did the other day, as I said, but I lost everything I wrote. Sigh.
I just want to tell you how incredible an author you are. Words are beautiful. But you make them majestic.
I'm not saying this as a biased friend, either. I'm saying this as a fellow writer. (And grammar nazi/plot snob. =p [JK...ish *hides*]) The way you bring forth such vivid imagery through just a few sentences... I could never do it. Never. It's amazing, and I adore it. (I'm also super jealous ;])
You're one of, if not the most talented writer I have ever read the work of. And I have read a lot of works ;] I cannot wait to read more.
I could go on and on about this all day long, but I have school to do. *Hugs* Love ya, Fear.
Oh, and,
KEEP. WRITING. !!.
I just want to tell you how incredible an author you are. Words are beautiful. But you make them majestic.
I'm not saying this as a biased friend, either. I'm saying this as a fellow writer. (And grammar nazi/plot snob. =p [JK...ish *hides*]) The way you bring forth such vivid imagery through just a few sentences... I could never do it. Never. It's amazing, and I adore it. (I'm also super jealous ;])
You're one of, if not the most talented writer I have ever read the work of. And I have read a lot of works ;] I cannot wait to read more.
I could go on and on about this all day long, but I have school to do. *Hugs* Love ya, Fear.
Oh, and,
KEEP. WRITING. !!.

Oh, in that case, it doesn't really correspond to our time. It's in a completely different dimension, so it's hard to compare.GratiaDei wrote:I think she's asking whether it corresponds somehow to our time. For instance, there's a gap in the middle of the story that's 45 minutes by the little time you put at the top. Does that mean 45 minutes as we know it, or is it different?

Does that make sense?

@ Samantha: Thanks, Sheya.


Thanks, sister.

P.S. I might be posting some of Pack soon...it has you in it!!!!


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Terrific writing, as always! Keep up the amazing work, sister. 
Cannot wait to read more.

Cannot wait to read more.
"A battle can be considered lost only when you cease to fight."~Shtakji

PPS: Thanks to Blitz for editing! You were right, she is really whiny.

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Sad, haunting, but wonderful chapter! Looking forward to the next one!
Thanks for answering my question about the chromos, btw. I was probably thinking it was more complicated than it was.
Thanks for answering my question about the chromos, btw. I was probably thinking it was more complicated than it was.

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I agree with Ameraka, wonderful chapter! I am truly mesmerized by Elf... Her mysteries are truly exasperating! I must know the answers!
Can't wait for the next installment!
Can't wait for the next installment!

Aw, you guys are too kind! You're welcome, Ameraka.
Thanks, 'Con and Gratia! It is my delight to tease your imaginations. *bows* 
Blitz is a wonderful editor! I tried to tone down the excessive descriptions. 



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Oh no Buck is gone!!!
Why was he arrested? Why is she running in the first place? so many questions.
I love the action and level of detail in this.

I love the action and level of detail in this.
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NOOOOO! Not Buck! Vixey, what are you doing?? *growls in total disgust*
Okay, so I'm ready for the next installment! Haha
Okay, so I'm ready for the next installment! Haha
