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Here's an idea, you can use it if you haven't found one already or like it!
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Jupiter was used as a girl's name in the movie Jupiter Ascending. I thought it sounded pretty :) I've heard Venus as a girl's name too.
Do not boast about tomorrow, for you do not know what a day may bring. -Proverbs 27:1
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Stella: Sounds AWESOME!
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WOW... I mean Wow MnM! That's amazing! I had the same idea for pants though I did a skirt on pants but I LOVE the shirt!
Stella Jupiter as girls name?! that's almost neat.
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I read a book where the girl's name was Estrella, if that you like that.

And sorry I haven't drawn anything. I'll try to get to it later today.
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Mickey wrote:WOW... I mean Wow MnM! That's amazing! I had the same idea for pants though I did a skirt on pants but I LOVE the shirt!
Stella Jupiter as girls name?! that's almost neat.
Thank you so much! Stella Jupiter sounds like a good name to me. :)
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Hey Maybe I'l use Stella Jupiter as a name! I like that!

-- Mon Sep 07, 2015 4:38 pm --

Thats OK Sam! I would like to see it though!!

-- Sat Sep 19, 2015 1:46 pm --

Well first chapter!





These will be in little boxes!


Robot Intelligence:
Robots are programmed with Human or small intelligence sometimes even super!!
Human intelligence means they think act and talk like us. Although they are bit smarter.
Small means they have only the normal robotic intelligence
Super means they are super smart.




NannyBot: A NannyBot is Robot with Human intelligent plus some. They are private tutors [for when you get sick]
They have all kinds of useful things you never know what they’re pull out!






SPACE WALKERS
UNIVERSAL HIDE AND SEEK


CHAPTER ONE: A MIDNIGHT SOUND
Creeeeeaaak!
Luna sat up in bed. Her heart was beating hard. It was only slightest sound, but Luna had heard deep down something was not right!
She peeked out from under her covers. But all she saw were the stars outside of her four porthole windows. Bright and beaming, but they were normal there wasn’t a black hole or exploding supernova just the normal billions of stars and planets.
She then looked around her room: Normal. Her box bed (very soft) her desk littered with homework, the bookshelf- Normal,
She reached over to her night stand and pressed a clear button. Then the walls facing the inner part of the space ship turned into a one sided glass mirror. Nothing.
Luna lay back down and tried to sleep, but she was afraid.
She got back up pulled on her robe and walked to a closet door and knocked.
“I’m sleeping here” muttered a tired voice.
“Please Stella come out… please”
“Oh all right Luna”
The door opened and out came a NannyBot. She sported a blue apron over her stainless steel body. Her head was a half circle the bottom was flat. The head was held up by a metal hose. Her round body hovered. Four arms that were made of the same material as the neck. The neck as well as the arms could move up and down or in and out. She had a box in her middle which is where she kept her amazing never ending supply of tools!
“What is it?” said Stella.
“I heard a noise.”
“Yes well what do you want me to do about it?” Said Stella in a snappy voice.
“Never mind…I didn’t men to upset you. I... I know you get upset when you get woken up. I’m sorry.”
“OH! Luna I am so sorry. I just have a hard time waken up that’s all,”

“ So shall I check our database of crimanils or maybe go to our police station!?”
“Really Stella!”
“Oh! Sorry! What shall I do?”
“Well you have all amazing gadgets? Wait can you like check for footprints?”
“Yup!”
“Awsome! You are the best!!”
“Ya! Thanks. Anything so I go back to sleep!”
“ So anything?!”
“No!”
“Anything?”
“NO!”
“Anything?”
“Yes, a giant elephant print!”
“What?!”
“Well there are footprints of every human and unhuman on the ship!”
“Oh….”
“Look I am sorry! You know I get fussy when I am not charged properly! Are you sure you weren’t dreaming? I have very good hearing and I heard nothing!”
“I’ll tell Father?!”
“No…Uh I mean that might not be a good idea!”
“Why?”
“Well go to sleep… by morning I should think of a good lie.”
“Huh?”
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That is really good. The plot-line is interesting, and I love the creativity.
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Thank you! \:D/ I like yours as well :D
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I love the plotline!! :D
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Mickey! I just remembered you had asked me to tell me what I thought of your story. I'm really sorry I forgot. :( It sounds interesting and I think you're doing good. :D
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Order of Chrysostom in the
Court of the Debate Vampires~

MF: How much do you know about Helios?

Woody: Let's see. I know you survived her
drama, I know she's a danger to
society, I know she's a lie, I know
Belle is unfazed by her wrath, I
know she has ox horns, and I know
I should beware of her.

(And she is also my enemy. :evil: )
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Prologue
About forty years ago my grandfather had made a big discovery, that is was possible to survive in space! And that is was possible to find other living civilizations in space. He was studying at a university in Florida. He was sure there was a way to live in space! So together with his best friend and a several other students and even some teachers they started out. It took almost twenty years for my grandfather and his friends to build a life sustaining space craft. It had a farm run by solar power from giant stars. An amusement park, church and school. Giant engines, a science lab sleeping quarters, and may other things much like a city. All the food we eat is gotten from our farm or other planets. Grandfather figured out how to lock the ship in orbit of a giant star then we could live with time. There are things I can’t understand, but the ship has a clock with twenty for hours that runs our day. We have Christmas and Birthdays but it is different than on earth.[ please don’t ask me how it works ] Any ways as my granddad was working on this project he married my grandmother and had four kids my dad is the oldest! Granddad was forty when he bored the ship with a twenty year old son and daughter-in-law. All my uncle and aunts came, along with many friends. So we have been here in SuperNova for many years.

Now my father is Captain Jupiter and my mother is Queen Solar, my oldest brother is Prince Ivo, and me Princess Luna, and my young brother Prince Pluto
Ok so now you know my family history so I hope now you can understand my story!\

So here is the prologue!
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Nice! I love this. Please write more! Belle, you might want to move this topic to the Gallery.
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That's great Mickey! I like how you explain how and why 'it' happened! The names, by the way, are AMAZING! :clap:
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If any of you want to read more pm me and I'll send it to you!
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