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Ooo! I'd like to see that! I've thought about posting a video of me singing on here too. (Though I might get kicked out of the soda shop for it...)
"Let me get this straight. I bet all those non-friends of yours try to embarrass you about your love for that stuff, right? So, you almost feel like you have to hide your treasures away and can only take them out in secret on rainy days when your mom goes to the store to get more liver and nobody is around to berate your sensitive spirit. Is that what you’re saying?" -Jay Smouse
Why would you get kicked out of the SS?PennyBassett wrote:Ooo! I'd like to see that! I've thought about posting a video of me singing on here too. (Though I might get kicked out of the soda shop for it...)
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I consider that our present sufferings are not worth comparing with the glory that will be revealed in us - Romans 8:18
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
This is a poem called The Sea. I had been writing this a while ago, though apparently it had to be raining for me to finish .
What if I said
You are a sea
Shimmering under the light
Brimming with dreams
Moving with a fight
Never ceasing to breathe
You cannot be defined
An adventure and mystery
No simple word will suffice
You are an enchanted melody
Currents dancing always
Darkness beneath your feet
Human you may be
Upon a solid ground
There is more to see though
Underneath the earth
The ash, the clay
Lies a sea of things
You battle every day
Darling take hold
Inhale and release
Cry out if you need
Reach up to your peace
A steady hand
To keep you from drowning
What if I said
You are a sea
Shimmering under the light
Brimming with dreams
Moving with a fight
Never ceasing to breathe
You cannot be defined
An adventure and mystery
No simple word will suffice
You are an enchanted melody
Currents dancing always
Darkness beneath your feet
Human you may be
Upon a solid ground
There is more to see though
Underneath the earth
The ash, the clay
Lies a sea of things
You battle every day
Darling take hold
Inhale and release
Cry out if you need
Reach up to your peace
A steady hand
To keep you from drowning
I consider that our present sufferings are not worth comparing with the glory that will be revealed in us - Romans 8:18
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
If anyone wondered what I look like, I did a quick sketch last night and inked it. It's a self portrait, which I've never done.
I consider that our present sufferings are not worth comparing with the glory that will be revealed in us - Romans 8:18
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
I like The Sea. I can almost hear the rhythm of the rain in it.
Cool drawing too. If your self-portrait is any indication, you're very pretty.
Cool drawing too. If your self-portrait is any indication, you're very pretty.
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My book, Justice Lost, is on Amazon Kindle: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00JM1XFCI
My book, Justice Lost, is on Amazon Kindle: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00JM1XFCI
These are all really good! I love them! I love the script about Connie and her family! I love the drawings of Jason! W.O.W.
Thank you Ameraka .Ameraka wrote:I like The Sea. I can almost hear the rhythm of the rain in it.
Cool drawing too. If your self-portrait is any indication, you're very pretty.
Aww, you're sweet. I'm glad I wrote it.Kathy0 wrote:These are all really good! I love them! I love the script about Connie and her family! I love the drawings of Jason! W.O.W.
I consider that our present sufferings are not worth comparing with the glory that will be revealed in us - Romans 8:18
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
Wash
To make a confession
I am not who you think
Understand please, my question
Who do you see in me?
From my perspective
Dirty shadows underneath
Muscles tight, lips hidden
Gained from a lack of sleep
My head will not silence
These walls collapsing on me
Sedentary movements
A depression crippling
Hello for me is help
Goodbye is simply hell
I am not well
Needy I am clingy
Restless, On Edge
Thoughts are terrifying
Yelling in my head
May I ask another one?
Why the conversation
The continuation
Patience and appreciation
I do not understand
Grace is a foreign thing
In this world a hand
Is solely for one's self
Cold hearts are the ones we envy
See my heart is bright inside
Someone struck a match
I'm waiting to die
See my heart is bright inside
Someone struck a match
I'm waiting to die
The one with the lighter is I
To make a confession
I am burning slowly, hurting
There is no lesson
Only that I need a rescue
Dip my head under please
Raise this victim
Of her own evil
Baptize me
Sanctify me
I do only understand
I have to be clean
To make a confession
I am not who you think
Understand please, my question
Who do you see in me?
From my perspective
Dirty shadows underneath
Muscles tight, lips hidden
Gained from a lack of sleep
My head will not silence
These walls collapsing on me
Sedentary movements
A depression crippling
Hello for me is help
Goodbye is simply hell
I am not well
Needy I am clingy
Restless, On Edge
Thoughts are terrifying
Yelling in my head
May I ask another one?
Why the conversation
The continuation
Patience and appreciation
I do not understand
Grace is a foreign thing
In this world a hand
Is solely for one's self
Cold hearts are the ones we envy
See my heart is bright inside
Someone struck a match
I'm waiting to die
See my heart is bright inside
Someone struck a match
I'm waiting to die
The one with the lighter is I
To make a confession
I am burning slowly, hurting
There is no lesson
Only that I need a rescue
Dip my head under please
Raise this victim
Of her own evil
Baptize me
Sanctify me
I do only understand
I have to be clean
I consider that our present sufferings are not worth comparing with the glory that will be revealed in us - Romans 8:18
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
Wow thats amazing! Great Job!
Wow I love it. And I am not really a poetry person.
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My book, Justice Lost, is on Amazon Kindle: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00JM1XFCI
My book, Justice Lost, is on Amazon Kindle: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00JM1XFCI
*blushes* Thank you Kathy.Kathy0 wrote:Wow thats amazing! Great Job!
Thank you for commenting, even if you don't particularly like poetry, it means a lot.Ameraka wrote:Wow I love it. And I am not really a poetry person.
I consider that our present sufferings are not worth comparing with the glory that will be revealed in us - Romans 8:18
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
I don't know why exactly I wrote this...may I have thoughts please?
love
As if it is air
It fills the quivering soul
Presses your weary heart to beat on
There is always wanting more
A power like nothing else
Cleansing, overwhelming, and pure
A true craving grows with its taste
For love's fulfilling control
love
As if it is air
It fills the quivering soul
Presses your weary heart to beat on
There is always wanting more
A power like nothing else
Cleansing, overwhelming, and pure
A true craving grows with its taste
For love's fulfilling control
I consider that our present sufferings are not worth comparing with the glory that will be revealed in us - Romans 8:18
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
REALLY GOOD! WOW!
Godmother! This is absolutely amazing! I ADORE your poetry. I sang every one, and each felt perfect to the tune. Keep writing, words love you.
Kathy0 wrote:REALLY GOOD! WOW!
Y'all are so sweet, thank you.Emma wrote:Godmother! This is absolutely amazing! I ADORE your poetry. I sang every one, and each felt perfect to the tune. Keep writing, words love you.
I consider that our present sufferings are not worth comparing with the glory that will be revealed in us - Romans 8:18
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
I listened to "Accidental Dilemma" yesterday and did some little over thinking. This might be sappy yet it did feel good to exercise my writing muscle and focus my attention. Please, tell me what you think.
I consider that our present sufferings are not worth comparing with the glory that will be revealed in us - Romans 8:18
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
This is good, Jo, I really like your insight into Odyssey as a whole
Strength for today, and bright hope for tomorrow.
"Why does Connie shower all of the time?" ~CGM_Games
I love this exploration of who Jason is.
You can hardly do too much overthinking when writing fanfiction.
I like this line because it seems to explain a lot of his personality. In fact, I read an article about CIA operatives which said that they like the danger, it becomes addictive, these are the kind of people that kind of life attracts.GJFH wrote: Jason latched on to danger, as a drug, addictive and pleasing.[/spoiler]
You can hardly do too much overthinking when writing fanfiction.
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My book, Justice Lost, is on Amazon Kindle: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00JM1XFCI
My book, Justice Lost, is on Amazon Kindle: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00JM1XFCI
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Oh my goodness Jo this is so amazing! I love it so much!
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Oh, I'm just not the best singer out there. I write songs tho!GJFH wrote:Why would you get kicked out of the SS?PennyBassett wrote:Ooo! I'd like to see that! I've thought about posting a video of me singing on here too. (Though I might get kicked out of the soda shop for it...)
"Let me get this straight. I bet all those non-friends of yours try to embarrass you about your love for that stuff, right? So, you almost feel like you have to hide your treasures away and can only take them out in secret on rainy days when your mom goes to the store to get more liver and nobody is around to berate your sensitive spirit. Is that what you’re saying?" -Jay Smouse