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DO u have a script that u want me write or someone else to write u can post it here. I'LL write anything u want. I'll message it to u and u can tell me if u like or not?

gabbygirl17 wrote:DO u have a script that u want me write or someone else to write u can post it here. I want to writer anything u want. I'll message it to u and u can tell me if u like or not?

I'm working on a script. It brings Rodney back. Here it is so far:

Scene 1
[Sound-effects: doorbell, doorbell heard again, snoring]

Harlow Doyle (half asleep): Zzzzzzzz-huh. Oh. Who could be at the door?

[Sound-effect: door opens]

Matthew Parker: Hi Mr. Doyle. It's career day at my school today and-

Harlow (interrupting): Oh. I see. You need me to help you find someone to talk to about their career.

Matthew: Well actually I was hoping I could talk to you. When I grow up I want to be a detective.

[Cheerful music starts]

Harlow: Why of course. I'd love to help you. First I'll have to know your name.

Matthew: I'm Matthew...Matthew Parker.

Harlow (mumbling while writing): Matthew Matthew Parker.

Matthew: No no. Just one Matthew.

Harlow: Oh. Is that spelled with an L or an O.

Matthew: Niether.

Harlow: Uh...okay. So what exactly do you want to know about detectives?

Matthew: Well I've always wanted to get some tips or even lessons from a real life detective.

Harlow: Sure. By the end of the day you'll have more than enough info for your career day report. Alright, step one to being a detective: uh...well...actually I have no idea what step one is. Oh yeah, first step is to fasten your seatbelt. No wait...that's first step when you get into a car.

Matthew: Okay just wait a minute. I've got to write this down.

Harlow: Step two...

(music and voices fade)

Scene 2

Rodney: Why not Pop. I want to do my career report on you. I need you to tell me more about your job. Please Pop.

Bart: No way. I have work to do. And don't call me Pop.

Rodney: But Pop.

Bart: Remember what happened last time you wrote a report on me? You said I was a retired army officer. And remember the other time when you said I was best friends with the President? And then there was the time you said I was a millionaire.

Rodney: But this is different, Pop.

Bart: I need to get to the Electric Palace so stop bugging me.

[Sound-effect: door slamming]

Rodney (whispering): Fine. If you won't tell me then I'll sneak into the Electric Palace and watch you. (shouting) Hey Mom, I'm going for a walk, Okay.

Dorris (shouting from the kitchen): Whatever. Just be back by supper.

[Sound-effect: door slamming]



Well, thats what I've got so far. How do you like it?

Wooton Bassett wrote:

gabbygirl17 wrote:DO u have a script that u want me write or someone else to write u can post it here. I want to writer anything u want. I'll message it to u and u can tell me if u like or not?

I'm working on a script. It brings Rodney back. Here it is so far:

Scene 1
[Sound-effects: doorbell, doorbell heard again, snoring]

Harlow Doyle (half asleep): Zzzzzzzz-huh. Oh. Who could be at the door?

[Sound-effect: door opens]

Matthew Parker: Hi Mr. Doyle. It's career day at my school today and-

Harlow (interrupting): Oh. I see. You need me to help you find someone to talk to about their career.

Matthew: Well actually I was hoping I could talk to you. When I grow up I want to be a detective.

[Cheerful music starts]

Harlow: Why of course. I'd love to help you. First I'll have to know your name.

Matthew: I'm Matthew...Matthew Parker.

Harlow (mumbling while writing): Matthew Matthew Parker.

Matthew: No no. Just one Matthew.

Harlow: Oh. Is that spelled with an L or an O.

Matthew: Niether.

Harlow: Uh...okay. So what exactly do you want to know about detectives?

Matthew: Well I've always wanted to get some tips or even lessons from a real life detective.

Harlow: Sure. By the end of the day you'll have more than enough info for your career day report. Alright, step one to being a detective: uh...well...actually I have no idea what step one is. Oh yeah, first step is to fasten your seatbelt. No wait...that's first step when you get into a car.

Matthew: Okay just wait a minute. I've got to write this down.

Harlow: Step two...

(music and voices fade)

Scene 2

Rodney: Why not Pop. I want to do my career report on you. I need you to tell me more about your job. Please Pop.

Bart: No way. I have work to do. And don't call me Pop.

Rodney: But Pop.

Bart: Remember what happened last time you wrote a report on me? You said I was a retired army officer. And remember the other time when you said I was best friends with the President? And then there was the time you said I was a millionaire.

Rodney: But this is different, Pop.

Bart: I need to get to the Electric Palace so stop bugging me.

[Sound-effect: door slamming]

Rodney (whispering): Fine. If you won't tell me then I'll sneak into the Electric Palace and watch you. (shouting) Hey Mom, I'm going for a walk, Okay.

Dorris (shouting from the kitchen): Whatever. Just be back by supper.

[Sound-effect: door slamming]



Well, thats what I've got so far. How do you like it?

Haha i love it! Its awesome keep it up!

gabbygirl17 wrote:

Wooton Bassett wrote:

gabbygirl17 wrote:DO u have a script that u want me write or someone else to write u can post it here. I want to writer anything u want. I'll message it to u and u can tell me if u like or not?

I'm working on a script. It brings Rodney back. Here it is so far:

Scene 1
[Sound-effects: doorbell, doorbell heard again, snoring]

Harlow Doyle (half asleep): Zzzzzzzz-huh. Oh. Who could be at the door?

[Sound-effect: door opens]

Matthew Parker: Hi Mr. Doyle. It's career day at my school today and-

Harlow (interrupting): Oh. I see. You need me to help you find someone to talk to about their career.

Matthew: Well actually I was hoping I could talk to you. When I grow up I want to be a detective.

[Cheerful music starts]

Harlow: Why of course. I'd love to help you. First I'll have to know your name.

Matthew: I'm Matthew...Matthew Parker.

Harlow (mumbling while writing): Matthew Matthew Parker.

Matthew: No no. Just one Matthew.

Harlow: Oh. Is that spelled with an L or an O.

Matthew: Niether.

Harlow: Uh...okay. So what exactly do you want to know about detectives?

Matthew: Well I've always wanted to get some tips or even lessons from a real life detective.

Harlow: Sure. By the end of the day you'll have more than enough info for your career day report. Alright, step one to being a detective: uh...well...actually I have no idea what step one is. Oh yeah, first step is to fasten your seatbelt. No wait...that's first step when you get into a car.

Matthew: Okay just wait a minute. I've got to write this down.

Harlow: Step two...

(music and voices fade)

Scene 2

Rodney: Why not Pop. I want to do my career report on you. I need you to tell me more about your job. Please Pop.

Bart: No way. I have work to do. And don't call me Pop.

Rodney: But Pop.

Bart: Remember what happened last time you wrote a report on me? You said I was a retired army officer. And remember the other time when you said I was best friends with the President? And then there was the time you said I was a millionaire.

Rodney: But this is different, Pop.

Bart: I need to get to the Electric Palace so stop bugging me.

[Sound-effect: door slamming]

Rodney (whispering): Fine. If you won't tell me then I'll sneak into the Electric Palace and watch you. (shouting) Hey Mom, I'm going for a walk, Okay.

Dorris (shouting from the kitchen): Whatever. Just be back by supper.

[Sound-effect: door slamming]



Well, thats what I've got so far. How do you like it?

Haha i love it! Its awesome keep it up!

Thanks.

I loved Harlow ! I could just imagine there voices with the lines

Yeah that's great!!!! I have LOTS of ideas that I should put on here!!

SparkyHappyGiraffe wrote:Yeah that's great!!!! I have LOTS of ideas that I should put on here!!

defiantly!

I'm writing the 7th Passages book, I didn't think of writing episodes, though. Thanks for the idea. (Excellent script Mr. Thinker!)

Odysseygirl101 wrote:I'm writing the 7th Passages book, I didn't think of writing episodes, though. Thanks for the idea. (Excellent script Mr. Thinker!)

Well, Wooton wrote the script, and I'm sure he'll thank you for it. I like to give credit where credit's due. Anyway, I hope your Passages attempt is successful, and I'd love to read that seventh book! I have worked on many Odyssey episode ideas, including one that I wrote before Something Old, Something New aired where Mitch came back, as well as a two-part mystery involving birthday cake and a mayoral election. I would enjoy writing for Odyssey some day, so I've thought of many other ideas.

How's the book going?

no i dont