My artsy fartsy thingers

A place to discuss your own works. Whether they may be literary, visual art, or music pieces, this is the place to show off your stuff!
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aragtaghooligan
Fudge Marble
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Joined: May 2015
Location: The Great White North

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My mind:a spiderweb
Of a fragile essence -
Woven together, strong

It hangs open to all
Who wish to gaze at its
Evidence of process

But in just one moment
One tiny child's finger
And misty strength is lost

Anxious, distraught, this mind
The spider's home is naught
But just thread on the ground

Again I build and spin
Until someone comes by
And simply sees beauty

Weak enough to crumble
Strong enough to retry
A thousand threads and webs

on and on and on - and
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Tarol
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I really like it RagTag. The comparison is an interesting one... You seemed to describe the essence of a spider web and your mind/thoughts very well. Good job! ^_^
xo eht haiasi-
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aragtaghooligan
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Location: The Great White North

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thanks oxy!
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aragtaghooligan
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Location: The Great White North

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Hi, I have collected some of my collected works and put them in one place. I will put future stories ect. here: http://scritchesandscratches.blogspot.ca/

There are swear words in some of the posts, but I have put warnings in the titles of those posts.
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