Tiger's AIO Writings
Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2014 11:44 pm
I admit it, I love writing fanfiction, especially for AIO. But whereas many people tend to discuss Connie's love life or Eugene and Katrina or anything to do with Jason—ever—my subjects of choice are usually Trent and Mandy. I've never understood why they stand out to me as my favorites, but they do, so here we are. I've got about a billion fics for them stashed in various places, but the one I'm probably most proud of is this one. If you like it, reviews fill my heart with joy and love; if you don't, critiques also fill my heart with joy and love, though of a more academic sort. 
And as a forward—these titles aren't actually titles; they're one-word prompts. I'm just bad at coming up with original titles, so the prompt title will have to do.
Trent and Mandy are both sixteen here, though Trent's the one with his own car. It's always been a headcanon of mine that they grew even closer together because they were in a lot of theatre productions together, both at Odyssey High and at the Harlequin.
Ineloquent
"That was a pretty good final production, wasn't it?" Mandy asked as she walked with Trent to his car. They had eaten out with some of their theatre friends at Hal's Diner in celebration of the final performance of Anything Goes at the high school, and now that they were by themselves, they had more of a chance to be more freely critical.
Trent nodded in agreement. "There were some pretty unfortunate moments at the beginning, though—like when Marvin forgot the cue for the reporter and the photographer at the beginning?"
"Yeah, or when Hannah's voice cracked when she sang the reprise of 'Easy to Love'. I think we all kind of cringed there." Noticing Trent stopping to lean against his car, Mandy followed suit. "It wasn't half as bad as the matinee, though."
"Nothing is that bad," Trent snorted. "Between Tracy forgetting her lines and Alex screwing up the lighting by accident—"
"That wasn't his fault, though," Mandy reminded him. "All the tech crew who were up in the booth said the computer went haywire for a few seconds."
"Yeah, I know, but it's still fun to tease him about it."
Mandy smiled, shaking her head. Even being the sweetest guy in the world hadn't diminished the inner teenage boy in him. "At least we got some good pancakes out of the deal. I will never get over how delicious Hal's Diner's chocolate-chip pancakes are; I could live forever on those things."
Trent laughed. "Can you say 'sweet tooth'? I'm just glad your parents were willing to let me drive you out to Hal's at 9:00 on a Saturday night. Which reminds me, we probably should be heading back to your house," he added guiltily. "Your dad did tell me to have you home by 10:00, and it's 9:40 now."
"Wait a moment." Trent turned to look at her expectantly, and she was grateful for the low lighting so he couldn't see her blush. "Can I, um, ask you something?" The question had been worrying her for over two months, ever since that past Valentine's Day, and she cursed herself inwardly for not having asked him sooner. "Do you...um...well, what I—I mean, do you still, you know..." She trailed off.
"Do I still what?" Trent tipped his head to one side.
She steeled herself, then the question tumbled out of her mouth in a rush. "Dyoustilikeme?"
She wasn't looking at him, but she could practically feel his brow furrowing in confusion. "Sorry?"
Mandy took a deep breath. "Do you...still like me?" she repeated. "Like...like what happened in middle school."
"Well, I, uh," he stammered, "I—why do you ask?"
For such an intelligent guy, he can be really obtuse about this stuff. "Why do you think I'm asking?"
"Well, I—I don't know, you kind of sprang it on me—"
"You're avoiding the question." In point of fact, she wasn't sure if she wanted it answered, but she had asked it, and there was no taking it back.
"I—I don't—what, do you like me now or something?" he blustered.
"This isn't about me!" she protested, knowing full well that it was—though she couldn't help but notice the sardonic tone in his voice.
"Oh, really? Then why did you ask?" He sounded uncharacteristically agitated.
"I—I just wanted to know, that's all!" The words she wanted to say instead had been so simple, and were the actual truth—why couldn't she say something that didn't make her want to punt herself from there to Odenton?
"So you just arbitrarily asked me if I still had a crush on you the way I did in middle school and you have no ulterior reason for wanting to know? What, are you doing a scientific study on unrequited—unrequited affection, or something?"
The bitter tone in his voice caught her off-guard. "What do you mean, unrequited?" In my mind's eye, this was so much simpler...
He snorted derisively. "Well, it looks like you have your answer, then, doesn't it?" He sighed, and when he continued, he sounded like the words were being dragged out of him. "Yes, Mandy. I still like you. Are you happy now?" When she didn't answer, he sighed more heavily. "Look, why don't I just take you home and you can call Liz and tell her that my weird crush on you still exists and you can gossip the night away about how much of a creep you think I am?"
Mandy was taken aback. "What? Why would I think you're—Trent, I didn't mean it like that, it's just—" She was trying desperately to articulate her thoughts, but the warm, giddy feeling in her stomach was making that difficult. "Trent, I meant all that to say that, well...I like you now, too."
Far from looking happy at this news, Trent looked still more despondent. "Didn't we have this conversation two years ago? You like me as a friend, just friends, that's as far as you want—"
"No." She cut him off, finally regaining some control of her senses. "I mean, I like you, like-a-boyfriend like you." She pressed her lips together nervously.
She looked up into his face and saw his eyes bright with hope. "You're—you're serious?"
"Of course I am, I was trying to tell you, but I didn't want to tell you because I was nervous, so I guess I wanted to know if you liked me, so then I could tell you, but then I guess that wasn't really fair to you because you—"
Mandy's rambling was cut off when Trent, feeling elation like he hadn't in awhile, gathered her in his arms in a tight embrace and let out a joyful laugh. "Like I care now!"
He put her down, beaming at her. She grinned back, giggling nervously—giggling, was this what this guy had done to her?—before asking yet another question. "So...where does that leave us? Are we going out? Are we boyfriend and girlfriend? What?"
"Well, we'd, ah, have to have gone somewhere for it to qualify as 'going out'," he remarked, rubbing the back of his neck. "But, well, boyfriend and girlfriend...yeah, I think...I think we are now. I mean, if we like each other that way, then I guess—"
"Yeah," she agreed. She checked her watch in an effort to ignore the heat rising in her cheeks. "Actually, um, if you want me to be allowed to even see you again, you should probably take me home now, it's 9:50."
"Oh! Um, right, yeah, I should probably do that." He fumbled nervously with his keys as she walked around to the passenger side door, then finally managed to unlock the car. He slid into the driver's seat, started the car, and headed in the direction of the Straussbergs' house.
When they finally got there—which mercifully only took about five minutes, a fact that Trent only half-jokingly marked down to the grace of God—Trent reached out and took her left hand in his, feeling his heartrate quicken at the contact. "Hey, um, about that 'going out' thing, we should, ah, probably do that some time."
Mandy lifted an eyebrow. "Probably?"
He grinned, a little sheepishly. "Okay, definitely. So...maybe...this Friday night?"
"Hmm...well, I might have to move some really important appointments with our state representatives and Senators around, but I think I'm free." She grinned. "What did you have in mind?"
He gave her a shy smile. "I was thinking chocolate chip pancakes at Hal's?"
She gave his hand an affectionate squeeze. "And this is why you're my boyfriend." Trying to keep a cool head with that warm giddy feeling in her stomach coming back in full force at the word "boyfriend", she reluctantly turned to go. "See you at church tomorrow, I guess."
"Uh...yeah. See ya." Trent watched her as she walked up her driveway and into her house, trying to concentrate on the fact that she was inside safely rather than the rapid beating of his heart intrinsic to her squeezing his hand. Boyfriend...he was her boyfriend...
"Well, God, it's been some kind of interesting evening," he murmured with a smile as he put the car in gear, "and I thank You for it."
And as a forward—these titles aren't actually titles; they're one-word prompts. I'm just bad at coming up with original titles, so the prompt title will have to do.
Trent and Mandy are both sixteen here, though Trent's the one with his own car. It's always been a headcanon of mine that they grew even closer together because they were in a lot of theatre productions together, both at Odyssey High and at the Harlequin.
Ineloquent
"That was a pretty good final production, wasn't it?" Mandy asked as she walked with Trent to his car. They had eaten out with some of their theatre friends at Hal's Diner in celebration of the final performance of Anything Goes at the high school, and now that they were by themselves, they had more of a chance to be more freely critical.
Trent nodded in agreement. "There were some pretty unfortunate moments at the beginning, though—like when Marvin forgot the cue for the reporter and the photographer at the beginning?"
"Yeah, or when Hannah's voice cracked when she sang the reprise of 'Easy to Love'. I think we all kind of cringed there." Noticing Trent stopping to lean against his car, Mandy followed suit. "It wasn't half as bad as the matinee, though."
"Nothing is that bad," Trent snorted. "Between Tracy forgetting her lines and Alex screwing up the lighting by accident—"
"That wasn't his fault, though," Mandy reminded him. "All the tech crew who were up in the booth said the computer went haywire for a few seconds."
"Yeah, I know, but it's still fun to tease him about it."
Mandy smiled, shaking her head. Even being the sweetest guy in the world hadn't diminished the inner teenage boy in him. "At least we got some good pancakes out of the deal. I will never get over how delicious Hal's Diner's chocolate-chip pancakes are; I could live forever on those things."
Trent laughed. "Can you say 'sweet tooth'? I'm just glad your parents were willing to let me drive you out to Hal's at 9:00 on a Saturday night. Which reminds me, we probably should be heading back to your house," he added guiltily. "Your dad did tell me to have you home by 10:00, and it's 9:40 now."
"Wait a moment." Trent turned to look at her expectantly, and she was grateful for the low lighting so he couldn't see her blush. "Can I, um, ask you something?" The question had been worrying her for over two months, ever since that past Valentine's Day, and she cursed herself inwardly for not having asked him sooner. "Do you...um...well, what I—I mean, do you still, you know..." She trailed off.
"Do I still what?" Trent tipped his head to one side.
She steeled herself, then the question tumbled out of her mouth in a rush. "Dyoustilikeme?"
She wasn't looking at him, but she could practically feel his brow furrowing in confusion. "Sorry?"
Mandy took a deep breath. "Do you...still like me?" she repeated. "Like...like what happened in middle school."
"Well, I, uh," he stammered, "I—why do you ask?"
For such an intelligent guy, he can be really obtuse about this stuff. "Why do you think I'm asking?"
"Well, I—I don't know, you kind of sprang it on me—"
"You're avoiding the question." In point of fact, she wasn't sure if she wanted it answered, but she had asked it, and there was no taking it back.
"I—I don't—what, do you like me now or something?" he blustered.
"This isn't about me!" she protested, knowing full well that it was—though she couldn't help but notice the sardonic tone in his voice.
"Oh, really? Then why did you ask?" He sounded uncharacteristically agitated.
"I—I just wanted to know, that's all!" The words she wanted to say instead had been so simple, and were the actual truth—why couldn't she say something that didn't make her want to punt herself from there to Odenton?
"So you just arbitrarily asked me if I still had a crush on you the way I did in middle school and you have no ulterior reason for wanting to know? What, are you doing a scientific study on unrequited—unrequited affection, or something?"
The bitter tone in his voice caught her off-guard. "What do you mean, unrequited?" In my mind's eye, this was so much simpler...
He snorted derisively. "Well, it looks like you have your answer, then, doesn't it?" He sighed, and when he continued, he sounded like the words were being dragged out of him. "Yes, Mandy. I still like you. Are you happy now?" When she didn't answer, he sighed more heavily. "Look, why don't I just take you home and you can call Liz and tell her that my weird crush on you still exists and you can gossip the night away about how much of a creep you think I am?"
Mandy was taken aback. "What? Why would I think you're—Trent, I didn't mean it like that, it's just—" She was trying desperately to articulate her thoughts, but the warm, giddy feeling in her stomach was making that difficult. "Trent, I meant all that to say that, well...I like you now, too."
Far from looking happy at this news, Trent looked still more despondent. "Didn't we have this conversation two years ago? You like me as a friend, just friends, that's as far as you want—"
"No." She cut him off, finally regaining some control of her senses. "I mean, I like you, like-a-boyfriend like you." She pressed her lips together nervously.
She looked up into his face and saw his eyes bright with hope. "You're—you're serious?"
"Of course I am, I was trying to tell you, but I didn't want to tell you because I was nervous, so I guess I wanted to know if you liked me, so then I could tell you, but then I guess that wasn't really fair to you because you—"
Mandy's rambling was cut off when Trent, feeling elation like he hadn't in awhile, gathered her in his arms in a tight embrace and let out a joyful laugh. "Like I care now!"
He put her down, beaming at her. She grinned back, giggling nervously—giggling, was this what this guy had done to her?—before asking yet another question. "So...where does that leave us? Are we going out? Are we boyfriend and girlfriend? What?"
"Well, we'd, ah, have to have gone somewhere for it to qualify as 'going out'," he remarked, rubbing the back of his neck. "But, well, boyfriend and girlfriend...yeah, I think...I think we are now. I mean, if we like each other that way, then I guess—"
"Yeah," she agreed. She checked her watch in an effort to ignore the heat rising in her cheeks. "Actually, um, if you want me to be allowed to even see you again, you should probably take me home now, it's 9:50."
"Oh! Um, right, yeah, I should probably do that." He fumbled nervously with his keys as she walked around to the passenger side door, then finally managed to unlock the car. He slid into the driver's seat, started the car, and headed in the direction of the Straussbergs' house.
When they finally got there—which mercifully only took about five minutes, a fact that Trent only half-jokingly marked down to the grace of God—Trent reached out and took her left hand in his, feeling his heartrate quicken at the contact. "Hey, um, about that 'going out' thing, we should, ah, probably do that some time."
Mandy lifted an eyebrow. "Probably?"
He grinned, a little sheepishly. "Okay, definitely. So...maybe...this Friday night?"
"Hmm...well, I might have to move some really important appointments with our state representatives and Senators around, but I think I'm free." She grinned. "What did you have in mind?"
He gave her a shy smile. "I was thinking chocolate chip pancakes at Hal's?"
She gave his hand an affectionate squeeze. "And this is why you're my boyfriend." Trying to keep a cool head with that warm giddy feeling in her stomach coming back in full force at the word "boyfriend", she reluctantly turned to go. "See you at church tomorrow, I guess."
"Uh...yeah. See ya." Trent watched her as she walked up her driveway and into her house, trying to concentrate on the fact that she was inside safely rather than the rapid beating of his heart intrinsic to her squeezing his hand. Boyfriend...he was her boyfriend...
"Well, God, it's been some kind of interesting evening," he murmured with a smile as he put the car in gear, "and I thank You for it."