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Helios
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Ah....superb as usual. Tho I'm starting to get creeped out by the dad...he's up to something... :)
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Blitz
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I love it Ameraka. Inspiration is building for my story.
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Ameraka
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Thanks Helios and Blitz!

Blitz- I am glad that you're getting inspiration to your story--I'm looking forward to reading more of it!

And as for the father--you will find out about at least part of it in this chapter. ;)
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Helios
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NOOOOOOO!!! NOT TASHI!!! Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo......... *gasps, sobbing, as tears run down her cheeks* Just what I thought he'd escape....nooooooo!!!! *anguished cry of an animal in pain somewhere* \
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;)
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Blitz
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I actually need some one to le post.... Wow that was great... I need more of your story.
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Ameraka
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O.o
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Good, he's going back. I hope Lith and Tashi are okay! I neeeeeeed more!
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Helios
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Yippee! Tho I might have taken Glory with me. ;) I'll bet Tashi's on the brink of death and then Jet'll come swooping in to save the day! *girlish sigh* How romantic... ;)
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Ameraka
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Well, I forgot to mention that the Channel can only take one person at a time. A limitation they're trying to fix. :) And it's the first one of its kind.
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! *anguished cry of horror rips from Helios* They were so close to winning.... :( I have got to see what happens next!!! O.o
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:D
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Helios
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Awwwwwwwwwwww...............how beautiful. Is that the end? :) Cause somehow I just don't want it to stop...
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Well, I don't have any more written. I was thinking of either writing one more chapter, or starting another story. Not totally sure which direction to go at the moment, although I have some ideas. :)
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Ooooo....have Justice go back to the other world and marry Tashi!!! True love... ;)

Lol, okay, maybe you could write about one of Jet's siblings. Or do a short single on Lith. Or maybe...I don't know...talk about the psychotic Lapparan! :D
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That was a good story though I would love it to be way longer.
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Ameraka
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Thanks for the ideas Helios! I may do all of them. :) Although I don't think they are going to get married, at least, not right away. ;)

Thanks Blitz! I think I will write more, a sequel at least. Not totally sure what form it will take. :) Right now I'm actually writing a short story about Jet's past but I don't know if I'll post it on here because it's supposed to be for a writing assignment for a class.

The next thing I post may be entirely unrelated, but we'll see. Things are just in the idea stage at the moment.... :)
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Ooooo, can't wait! Whatever you post I will wildly applaud...unless you kill Jet or Tashi off.

Then I will strangle you. :P (lol not really)
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I don't like it when main characters die so there probably little chance of that. :) Everything else is fair game though. :twisted:
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If you hate killing main character that is good.
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