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No, but I will right now.

I haven't read AIC yet, but I'm going to now.

Adventures in Connelsville is muuuuuuch more stylistically, thoroughly, and carefully written than J&M. Sorry, Wooton. Your last was much better than your others so far, but if you want to be anywhere near as great as AIC, you've still got miles of catching up to do. Meanwhile, Mr. Thinker keeps raising the bar with AIC.
Your writing shows a lot of talent, and you have the ability to be about as good as AIC. But you're NOT there yet.

Sure, if you want to be blunt. I love JaM but I love AIC too. So I'm not voting...yet. I'm just gonna see who impresses me more in later instalments.

Well put, Whittifer. As I say, I believe Wooton may end up being as good as AIC. So far, I've gotten the impression that Mr. Thinker is more dedicated to his blog. Wooton's dedication certainly may grow, so we'll just have to see.

Wooton is doing good, just give him some time...I think he's doing better and better with each one.

That much I can totally agree with. As I said, his last one was a tremendous improvement over the past ones.

Wooton's blog is pretty awesome too. I mean GOSH, I'm one of the authors! It doesn't get any better then that. But anyways, back to AIC and J&M, I like 'em both.

You're a shameless, brown-nosing, I'm-nice-to-everyone, lovey-dovey suck-up, dear. =P

Yeah, I'm a dearheart aren't I?

I kinda hate to vote for my own story, but I kinda have to. Wooton, Jason and Mitch is definitely improving with each installment, but it still needs work. I understand that AIC needs work as well, but having read both, I'm afraid I'm gonna have to sound like a boastful person and vote for my own. I have pretty much the same reasons as PF does. And since I know what's coming with AIC in later installments, I'm confident it'll be great. But if your Jason and Mitch keeps improving, maybe one day I'll change my vote. Who knows?

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Hey, Wooton! When will Installment 4 be out?

The Old Judge wrote:Hey, Wooton! When will Installment 4 be out?

It will be out by the end of day today unless I get banned from the computer or fall of a cliff or die or something.

Goody goody gumdrops!

Watch you go to a beach with extremely high cliffs.

I will Old Judge. I mean it's not like I'll just be walking and then fall of a cliiiiiiiiiiiif *splat*

I know CPR! Not really.

INSTALMENT 4 IS OUT

It was totally awesome!

Instalment 5 is out