Chapter 8 Glowing sigils floated across the holoscreen, some of them fading into the background and disappearing in a pattern that only made me sleepier. “Jet?” I jolted awake, and pain stabbed my head and arm. I must’ve fallen asleep for a second. Glory’s head glowed in front of me, waves of golden...

Ahh okay that makes sense. ;) But wait: if the desire to fly is inherited from the Winged, where does the ability to use lightning come from? Wait...so are the Savannahs Nobility? And Ember banished them? Does Quarantine still have the Purity Police? Or was that something you excised later on? The ...

Metal wings and lightning don't mix--unless you're Ember. LOL Kidding. But does Ember use wings, and if so, how does he use his lightning? / Ember does use wings. He just can't use lightning while he's wearing them. That's the thing-- Royalty have an inherent longing to fly, because of their Winged...

Thank you! :D Stream of consciousness \:D/ *read description of Blade* Yesssssssss. I love how you distinguish between his and Jet's size, because while Jet is pretty impressive in human terms, Blade is Royalty through and through and it shows. \:D/ Ooo, does this mean Blade favors Sky in appearance...

Blade. He almost crashed into me before he grabbed me by the shoulders and shook them, his golden eyes blazing into mine. “What in the Abyss are you doing here?” I pointed upwards. “I brought him in. To find out what happened to Mom.” My brother looked up at Peri, then back down at me. “Was this aut...

Thank you! I like reading your thoughts! ;) Does this mean then that the inhabitants of Mag City spend most of their time in hedonistic pursuits? O.o Yes, pretty much. Not that they're all completely selfish, they have families and do good things for others on occasion. It's a symptom of the fact th...

That would probably not work as if the worlds combine too much, they both collapse. There has to be something separating the two or the integrity of both worlds cannot survive. The only way to go from one to the other is a Portal. Also, Mag City, so far, is the most powerful world, because they're m...

Well....Actually, It is ok for Jet to go outside the Spire, just not unchaperoned by Ms. And he is with an M, Peri. Unless he would not want his father to know where he was....but there is nothing suspicious about him flying out somewhere. He is not mingling with the people, since the girl at the wi...

The skin between worlds was thinner at that spot. Many orikal bombs went off during the war and most did not create Portals. Probably a good thing as too many Portals would probably destroy the worlds. Hm, that may be a mistake. She should have recognized him. Unless he put on his mask beforehand......

I'm glad you like it: Yes, the Ms are very sophisticated, near-human in their mental capacity (that is, in the way they can mimic emotions. They're superior to humans in their intelligence) Of course! Flying is second nature to him. Doesn't think anything of just stepping out a window high in the Sp...

Thank you Helios!! :D <3 I am glad you like it and I love that you like my Jet (and Fralenn) Your wish is my command. Chapter 2 The door chimed. “Are you all right in there?” said a female voice, another M. “Yes,” I said. “I’m fine!” I shoved the toolbox under the bed, just in case she didn’t take t...

This is a story that takes place when Jet was 17 (vs Justice Lost, when he was 20). Tell me what you think! :) Chapter 1 My saber-toothed cat, Sabra, lay on the bed beside me. Her tail twitched as she stared out the floor-to-ceiling window, her fur gilded by the morning sunlight. A bird flew past in...

Well with the interaction with Jason and Jillian calling him cute, I have a suspicion they may be setting her up with Jason. She does have a J name....

How is it in accurate? I mean, I know it has diverged quite a bit from the show to the point of being AU, but is it to the point it is not Odysseyish at all? Of course the subject matter is for an older age group.... Are the characters too OOC? Should I keep writing? Not that I have been writing lat...

I like it so far! I like the idea of a background to Castles and Caldrons. And a story about Whit's past! I would love to read another chapter if there is one.

I saw a license plate yesterday that said WHITS!

For Novacom Rewritten I am going to go hide for like a year and figure the whole thing out before I come back, that way it will hopefully be in character and everything will be explained by the end. And then I can release it like over six weeks or something because it will be a completed story. tha...

I like the Valentines day thing. Myself as a character... seems weird to me. I could write someone sort of based on myself maybe...

Valentines-- Well you know who I'd write about. That's a long way off. Maybe we could write other holiday stories? Thanksgiving, Christmas etc....

Thank you Jo! And Katie! Chapter 18 "What does the witness know?" asked Connie. "Sierra didn't tell me yet." Markov looked at him disapprovingly as he led Tasha and Gray further down the hallway. "Have you talked to the witness?" he asked Sierra, leaning against the wal...

Well I want to see a future where the Chairman comes back and tries to take over.