The Many Works of GJFH
This is very good, GJFH!!! I really like it!
Jo March
"There is no such thing as impossible. The word itself says I'm possible."-Audrey Hepburn
“You are never too old to set another goal or to dream a new dream.” –C.S. Lewis
“No one ever made a difference by being like everyone else.” P.T. Barnum
Thank you Kate.
I consider that our present sufferings are not worth comparing with the glory that will be revealed in us - Romans 8:18
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
I like it too! Very good poem. I'm looking forward to more!
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My book, Justice Lost, is on Amazon Kindle: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00JM1XFCI
My book, Justice Lost, is on Amazon Kindle: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00JM1XFCI
I posted one of mine(if i were to be asked if I had any deep dark secrets, i would answer that i have only written one, maybe two poems in my entire life.) on my QnA, if you would like to look at it.
Jo March
"There is no such thing as impossible. The word itself says I'm possible."-Audrey Hepburn
“You are never too old to set another goal or to dream a new dream.” –C.S. Lewis
“No one ever made a difference by being like everyone else.” P.T. Barnum
This. Is. A. Beautiful. Poem.
You are very, extremely talented with your writing (and your drawings are awesome too!)
I actually also write poems, and this is just an inspiration to me!
You are very, extremely talented with your writing (and your drawings are awesome too!)
I actually also write poems, and this is just an inspiration to me!
I would rather have 4 quarters then 100 pennies...Be careful that you choose valuable friends.
Thank you Ameraka and hipster, you are so sweet .
This is a sketch of Jason I decided to ink. It isn't the best though I'd consider it to be one of my best.
I apologise that its such a massive size.
This is a sketch of Jason I decided to ink. It isn't the best though I'd consider it to be one of my best.
I consider that our present sufferings are not worth comparing with the glory that will be revealed in us - Romans 8:18
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
Wow! Amazing! I like the color of Jason's eyes and his shirt really makes the whole picture stand out! Great job!
I would rather have 4 quarters then 100 pennies...Be careful that you choose valuable friends.
COol! Yay, Jason! I do like his eyes.
I think there's a way to resize the picture but I'm not sure how to do it...
I think there's a way to resize the picture but I'm not sure how to do it...
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My book, Justice Lost, is on Amazon Kindle: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00JM1XFCI
My book, Justice Lost, is on Amazon Kindle: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00JM1XFCI
Thank you Ameraka and hipster. Receiving feedback is very encouraging
I consider that our present sufferings are not worth comparing with the glory that will be revealed in us - Romans 8:18
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
Well, this is the product of listening to Florence and the Machine after midnight. I'd really appreciate criticism since I know it isn't the best and I'm a horrible editor, though it is a little difficult to post writing on this site. Please let me know what you think could be changed and tell me if you actually enjoyed reading this. Thank you .
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I consider that our present sufferings are not worth comparing with the glory that will be revealed in us - Romans 8:18
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
Wow, Joe, this is great! I love how you fill in so much detail from Connie's perspective over the whole divorce thing, I really like it .
Strength for today, and bright hope for tomorrow.
"Why does Connie shower all of the time?" ~CGM_Games
Aww thank you Miss Connie G.
I consider that our present sufferings are not worth comparing with the glory that will be revealed in us - Romans 8:18
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
Ahhhh this is amazing Joe! Write more!
"I was born with white vans on"
"Vans weren't even popular when you were born"
K.R.E.
"Vans weren't even popular when you were born"
K.R.E.
This is REALLY good! I am glad you did a story on Connie's early life, and I like it!
Jo March
"There is no such thing as impossible. The word itself says I'm possible."-Audrey Hepburn
“You are never too old to set another goal or to dream a new dream.” –C.S. Lewis
“No one ever made a difference by being like everyone else.” P.T. Barnum
You're good at writing close POV, with visceral reactions and sensory details and imagery. It seems realistic and authentic to how Connie would feel and act. It's an interesting time period to write about which I haven't thought much about but you recreated it vividly.
There are some grammatical errors but they aren't the kind that detract much from the story and can be easily fixed.
There are some grammatical errors but they aren't the kind that detract much from the story and can be easily fixed.
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My book, Justice Lost, is on Amazon Kindle: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00JM1XFCI
My book, Justice Lost, is on Amazon Kindle: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00JM1XFCI
I will try to, thank you Didi .Didi wrote:Ahhhh this is amazing Joe! Write more!
*is touched* I'm glad I was able to write about her early life, I hope most of fits into canon though I had to be creative.AuntKate wrote:This is REALLY good! I am glad you did a story on Connie's early life, and I like it!
Thank you Ameraka...I do write a little from my personal experiences or from my point of view. I'm not sure what it is, perhaps an attention deficit, I've always been more sensitive to the sights and sounds around me.Ameraka wrote:You're good at writing close POV, with visceral reactions and sensory details and imagery. It seems realistic and authentic to how Connie would feel and act. It's an interesting time period to write about which I haven't thought much about but you recreated it vividly.
There are some grammatical errors but they aren't the kind that detract much from the story and can be easily fixed.
And yes, I could certainly improve the quality of my writing. I went back and edited the story a bit, noticing my horrid spelling and a few errors I hadn't intended for. Let me know if you notice anything more . Thank you again!
I consider that our present sufferings are not worth comparing with the glory that will be revealed in us - Romans 8:18
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
Thank you AuntSarah Here's another poem, more messy of course.
We spend our time
Lost in reflection
Searching for flaws
Imperfections
Wanting perfection
So desperately
Though not changing at all
In reality
Into our faces we gaze
Envisioning a fantasy
Where the throne is our safety
And we rule as they kneel
Proudly concerned with we
Who would know
How to ignore the feel
The weight of the pressure
It's suicidal
And exhilarating
We spend our time
On consumption
Craving for more
Well dressed perfection
Empty on the inside
Skin turning to dust
We spend our time
Lost in reflection
Searching for flaws
Imperfections
Wanting perfection
So desperately
Though not changing at all
In reality
Into our faces we gaze
Envisioning a fantasy
Where the throne is our safety
And we rule as they kneel
Proudly concerned with we
Who would know
How to ignore the feel
The weight of the pressure
It's suicidal
And exhilarating
We spend our time
On consumption
Craving for more
Well dressed perfection
Empty on the inside
Skin turning to dust
I consider that our present sufferings are not worth comparing with the glory that will be revealed in us - Romans 8:18
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
wow!
have you every tried writing songs? i like doing that better then writing poems! just a suggestions though I really like your poems!
have you every tried writing songs? i like doing that better then writing poems! just a suggestions though I really like your poems!
Aha suh dude
Well...I have tried before, I found that particular poem in an old notebook of mine and think it was intended as a song...that was three years ago at least. And perhaps I'll take up song writing again, I might even post a video of me singing.AuntSarah wrote:wow!
have you every tried writing songs? i like doing that better then writing poems! just a suggestions though I really like your poems!
Thank you for the suggestion AuntSarah .
I consider that our present sufferings are not worth comparing with the glory that will be revealed in us - Romans 8:18
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark
It’s not enough to be against something. You have to be for something better. – Tony Stark